I started this story like "Oh a cute little thing about going to Mars" and then things ramped up and I was suddenly WTF!! But in a good way honestly LOL You got my attention and then I was completely on board. I actually like how weird this story is because SPACE IS WEIRD. We don't know enough about the universe. Time, logic, it could easily be thrown out the window out there. Everything being so normal, even Sho being all "eh nothing's happening" and then CHAOS was fascinating to me. I applaud you trying out something unique, anon!
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I started this story like "Oh a cute little thing about going to Mars" and then things ramped up and I was suddenly WTF!! But in a good way honestly LOL You got my attention and then I was completely on board. I actually like how weird this story is because SPACE IS WEIRD. We don't know enough about the universe. Time, logic, it could easily be thrown out the window out there. Everything being so normal, even Sho being all "eh nothing's happening" and then CHAOS was fascinating to me. I applaud you trying out something unique, anon!
And that ending! Good luck Nino D: LOL