Oh my! This! This was beautiful! I loved Sho so much in this story I just want to squeeze him!
**Warning. For those who haven't read it yet: spoilers ahead**
I loved that you wrote the inner voice of both Nino and Sho explaining how their feeling grew little by little, turning into love. I specially loved the parts when Nino and Sho were alone, the closeness, the hugs, the looks, and the cuteness of the lovely confession Sho made in that veranda in Arima!
Well, I'd say -and I think I'm not wrong on this- that you did a very remarkable job in writing sci-fi!! All the details, the background story, the description of the true form of the aliens!! (so beautiful), and the fact that the spaceship looked like a giant snitch made me become a happy ball reading on the couch! In fact, I loved all the references you used along the story, like Jun being a trekie xD That was just great! I also loved Aiba's mistakes while speaking, made me laugh! So funny :) But I would never get in a car with him if he's driving xD It made me smile when I imagined hype Jun and Aiba loving each other around the place (poor Kee-ko!) And Ohno going around on his own fishing and extinct fish! Ohno!! He doesn't want to be a leader in any universe after all! Oh, and you made me hungry almost for the whole first part, so you know, hahaha.
I'm sure I'm forgetting lots of parts to comment, but what I want to say is that I REALLY appreciate all the effort that you've put into using what I suggested to make this great story (book length no less!! Wow!) Thank you very, very much! It even had a very cute ending where everything fell into place, making me smile like a fool, so you also know ^^; I can't thank you enough!
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**Warning. For those who haven't read it yet: spoilers ahead**
I loved that you wrote the inner voice of both Nino and Sho explaining how their feeling grew little by little, turning into love. I specially loved the parts when Nino and Sho were alone, the closeness, the hugs, the looks, and the cuteness of the lovely confession Sho made in that veranda in Arima!
Well, I'd say -and I think I'm not wrong on this- that you did a very remarkable job in writing sci-fi!! All the details, the background story, the description of the true form of the aliens!! (so beautiful), and the fact that the spaceship looked like a giant snitch made me become a happy ball reading on the couch! In fact, I loved all the references you used along the story, like Jun being a trekie xD That was just great! I also loved Aiba's mistakes while speaking, made me laugh! So funny :) But I would never get in a car with him if he's driving xD It made me smile when I imagined hype Jun and Aiba loving each other around the place (poor Kee-ko!) And Ohno going around on his own fishing and extinct fish! Ohno!! He doesn't want to be a leader in any universe after all!
Oh, and you made me hungry almost for the whole first part, so you know, hahaha.
I'm sure I'm forgetting lots of parts to comment, but what I want to say is that I REALLY appreciate all the effort that you've put into using what I suggested to make this great story (book length no less!! Wow!) Thank you very, very much! It even had a very cute ending where everything fell into place, making me smile like a fool, so you also know ^^; I can't thank you enough!