I loved this anon. First of all, it’s artfully written and I’m in love! I love how you string these words so beautifully, it’s a treat! So a big kudos to you for that!
I loved the setting, it’s so enchanting and fantastical, to an extent ridiculous and I love how there’s a balance between those two. It was quite perfect for the story.
But most of all, I loved the story. That Nino was still hurt and it’s not easy to get over it, yet there’s still feelings that he harbors for Jun and he can’t help it. Oo really managed to flesh out their problems and backgrounds; it was definitely not easy for the both of them, yet they managed to find their way back to each other. You remind us that no matter Jun’s excuse, there’s no excuse that makes up for the fact that he leaves Nino is the dust, almost literally, and that Nino’s grudge is completely understandable. But in the end, they decided to start over again and that just pulled at the heartstrings! It was an emotional ride, anon. I’m glad you wrote this, thank you.
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I loved the setting, it’s so enchanting and fantastical, to an extent ridiculous and I love how there’s a balance between those two. It was quite perfect for the story.
But most of all, I loved the story. That Nino was still hurt and it’s not easy to get over it, yet there’s still feelings that he harbors for Jun and he can’t help it. Oo really managed to flesh out their problems and backgrounds; it was definitely not easy for the both of them, yet they managed to find their way back to each other. You remind us that no matter Jun’s excuse, there’s no excuse that makes up for the fact that he leaves Nino is the dust, almost literally, and that Nino’s grudge is completely understandable. But in the end, they decided to start over again and that just pulled at the heartstrings! It was an emotional ride, anon. I’m glad you wrote this, thank you.