oviparous ([personal profile] oviparous) wrote in [community profile] ninoexchange 2018-07-02 06:33 pm (UTC)

My Twitter friends were throwing this link around my feed so here I am and good lord I'm glad they did because this was so good, I want to cry.

I really love your way with words. Your choices are so artful and I am in love with how you describe things. The dialogue was so clever; I really like how Jun and Nino employed their wit and humour with their vocabulary. Every sentence was tremendously satisfying to read. Seriously.

I also completely adore your setting ideas. The penis colouring table and the horse were strokes of genius and I loved how you let Nino and Jun behave with them. I could totally see these two characters at this fictional wedding. It was so beautiful.

And the emotions, good grief, you really had me hope so hard for a happy ending! I sort of knew they were headed for one and I thoroughly enjoyed how they got there.

Thank you for crafting so lovingly every process Nino and Jun needed to get back together. Using the flow of events at a wedding to push the story forward was incredibly effective and wonderfully thematic. I really enjoyed that the entire fic spanned only a short timeframe; it makes the story memorable as a whole, and that's how I'd like to replay it in my head. Every scene was so precious.

I hope you post this on Archive of Our Own so I can bookmark it and download it onto my reader! Fingers crossed!

Thank you for your hard work!

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