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Erin ([personal profile] nicefinalbeam) wrote in [community profile] ninoexchange 2018-06-18 08:32 pm (UTC)

“I’m a dreamer. So, of course, I chose to believe in you”

THAT KILLED ME, ANON. Ugh what a good line.

I love how you displayed the best parts of Sho and Nino's personalities through the story. Nino being a bit of a trickster in his way but for the absolute right reasons, caring enough to give a poor creature a chance at life and happiness. Sho's curiosity and love of adventure even if he's still a proper guy. The way they instantly connected with one another was so excellent, and I love that the creature was doing its part to nudge them along as well ;D

You did such a great job helping my imagination along. Being able to picture Nino squeezing through the crowds, and the creature grabbing food here and there, the too-big tuxedo, etc. And I love that I can say "SORRY JUN" in response to most of what happened ahaha. Poor Jun just wanted a date. It'll be his turn to find love next :D

Really cute and satisfying, thanks for the great read!

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