I love the way you paint a picture of what's happening here. Your words just take me right into the story, able to visualize everything so easily. I'm just a big fan of your style :)

Aiba's heartache, guh, you could really feel it. I love that Nino, in spite of wanting to be more, doesn't take advantage of the situation. He's a perfect friend for Aiba when he's needed to be, and it says a lot about his character in a short amount of time.

I love the little add on about the future. I'm so pleased for them both. ♥ Great read!