I'm so happy! I feel like you captured the Matsumiya dynamic as I see it, a true partnership, doting and affectionate and a little pushy at times but not full of fighting or biting sarcasm. All the subtle details you put in here about the relationship - like Jun coming home on time these days, or the smile he has when Nino walks in the door - MY HEART ♥ The various affectionate gestures throughout the story with allowing each other room to do work, shower, sleep, and navigate a day - it seems so natural. I especially liked the date because I could easily see Nino having to be honest about not being into the meal and Jun beating himself up for it. I'm glad Nino wouldn't allow him to sulk about it, that they could find a way to fix the day :D
I LOVE THAT SHO IS IN LOVE WITH CHEESECAKE - WHAT AN OTP!! And the friendship between him and Ohno with all the small back rubs of support had me grinning. Aiba is such a champion! I love that it's his place that brings everyone together, that and his kickass wife :D
All of the friendships were so expertly described - Sho taking Nino's route, Aiba and Nino's shouting match, the birthday party, the acting-out of the Matsumiya first kiss. It was just... :D
I genuinely don't know how to convey all the various things I loved about this story, I just did! So much! Great job, anon ♥
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I LOVE THAT SHO IS IN LOVE WITH CHEESECAKE - WHAT AN OTP!! And the friendship between him and Ohno with all the small back rubs of support had me grinning. Aiba is such a champion! I love that it's his place that brings everyone together, that and his kickass wife :D
All of the friendships were so expertly described - Sho taking Nino's route, Aiba and Nino's shouting match, the birthday party, the acting-out of the Matsumiya first kiss. It was just... :D
I genuinely don't know how to convey all the various things I loved about this story, I just did! So much! Great job, anon ♥