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Erin ([personal profile] nicefinalbeam) wrote in [community profile] ninoexchange 2017-07-02 11:49 am (UTC)

I really enjoyed the way you explored the properties and rules of magic in this fic. The idea that a spell was trying to find stress relief for Jun - but wasn't just going to offer it to him, had to push him into figuring his life out? I really enjoyed that - and the twist at the end of actually keeping both jobs was great :D Nino having wished for love is ADORABLE and I'm glad he found it. I also really liked that sex for them wasn't just jumping at each other, they had to ease into it and it started a little awkwardly lol That's much more realistic honestly!

Thanks for the fun read :)

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