Ahh, such a fascinating universe you've created here! I was so engaged reading this that I was annoyed when I had to put it aside for RL things halfway through lol. I've read a few Demon AUs before, but only ever featuring a demon/human relationship - having Nino and Jun both be demons (mostly) living in the mortal world was an interesting variation!
I found Nino oddly fitting as a demon living as a human, still keeping some of his supernatural abilities & knowledge, but also embracing his new life as a human. I'm a bit slow, so I only realised his demon form was probably supposed to be like how he was in the Nissan CM during the epilogue haha. That's a great Nino, so it was a great choice! And I liked how Jun eventually used a glamour to appear as the Jun we know and love - I can def understand Nino's reaction to his human appearance ;).
I was enjoying the slow and sweet development of Nino and Jun's relationship throughout, but at the same time, I knew it couldn't last. You did a really great job keeping me in suspense about what would happen! I had my suspicions about Ohno, but I'm glad he wasn't actually Nino's enemy. I was also a bit worried about the queen's motives, so it was nice to learn that she was just trying to help Nino with his crush. He deserved to be given that chance of happiness with Jun after all that happened.
Really enjoyable story, anon, thank you for sharing!
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I found Nino oddly fitting as a demon living as a human, still keeping some of his supernatural abilities & knowledge, but also embracing his new life as a human. I'm a bit slow, so I only realised his demon form was probably supposed to be like how he was in the Nissan CM during the epilogue haha. That's a great Nino, so it was a great choice! And I liked how Jun eventually used a glamour to appear as the Jun we know and love - I can def understand Nino's reaction to his human appearance ;).
I was enjoying the slow and sweet development of Nino and Jun's relationship throughout, but at the same time, I knew it couldn't last. You did a really great job keeping me in suspense about what would happen! I had my suspicions about Ohno, but I'm glad he wasn't actually Nino's enemy. I was also a bit worried about the queen's motives, so it was nice to learn that she was just trying to help Nino with his crush. He deserved to be given that chance of happiness with Jun after all that happened.
Really enjoyable story, anon, thank you for sharing!