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yumi_usagi ([personal profile] yumi_usagi) wrote in [community profile] ninoexchange 2017-06-26 12:54 am (UTC)

I really like how Nino was so powerful in magic and Jun was physically stronger.
Jun is cute worried about Nino's eating habit and offered to cook for him <3
I really like the way you wrote the sex scene, all the details are so hot.
This fic is my favorite so far! Because the plot is interesting, there's that question through out the story that kept the readers wondering till the end, the way you described their relationship and that they really care for and love each other.
I really like the way you approach that the beginning is Nino's POV then the whole story was Jun's POV then the epilogue was Nino's POV to explain things
Thanks author-san for sharing! I'm looking forward to the sequel (if it happens)

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