I must say I don't usually like reading this stories with this type of ending at all. This fic is an exeption here. I LOVED it.
I love it how you have painted the setting for the reader, it's easy to imagine. It's easy to imagine Sakumiya going their life just like that, despite not knowing their past, just seeing them interact so well together.
Nino and Jun... Let me just take a breath and love them. Your characterization is great, and it feels so THEM, how Nino thinks and then there's MJ-II. I love him, I just can't. He's Jun, he's awesome, I love him.
Also OHNO can I love my little leader more? He's very quiet here, yet when he actually needs to be leader-like, he's exactly that and more. Ohno is not easy to write, and you've done it well! Special thanks for that.
Aiba is also so cute here, energetic and innocent in Aiba-like way. His interactions with Nino are precious, and I was delighted to see them become friends like this.
I'm so thankful atm that I sacrificed time to read this instead of doing something completely useless, I feel like I'm very content now, though I'm obviously also curious what happens next... I would wanna know, though I don't need to, and that frustrating feeling after reading a good story is the best. Such a DoM I am. Well written story, Author-san! Thank you for sharing, I've enjoyed the read a lot <3
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I love it how you have painted the setting for the reader, it's easy to imagine. It's easy to imagine Sakumiya going their life just like that, despite not knowing their past, just seeing them interact so well together.
Nino and Jun... Let me just take a breath and love them. Your characterization is great, and it feels so THEM, how Nino thinks and then there's MJ-II. I love him, I just can't. He's Jun, he's awesome, I love him.
Also OHNO can I love my little leader more? He's very quiet here, yet when he actually needs to be leader-like, he's exactly that and more. Ohno is not easy to write, and you've done it well! Special thanks for that.
Aiba is also so cute here, energetic and innocent in Aiba-like way. His interactions with Nino are precious, and I was delighted to see them become friends like this.
I'm so thankful atm that I sacrificed time to read this instead of doing something completely useless, I feel like I'm very content now, though I'm obviously also curious what happens next... I would wanna know, though I don't need to, and that frustrating feeling after reading a good story is the best. Such a DoM I am. Well written story, Author-san! Thank you for sharing, I've enjoyed the read a lot <3