Thoroughly enjoyed this story!! You definitely have a way with world building I am envious of, and appreciate so much. All the details about what would be valuable in a trade, the heat of the desert, the tightness of Jun's pants LOL Honestly it was a delight to read. Loved how you captured Arashi as a group in the moments they were all together.
The dynamic between Jun and Nino was perfect. Just the right amount of hesitance on Nino's part, understandable I think, and the right amount of flirting from Jun ;D What I loved was that even in the atmosphere of an action-like story, you gave the relationship time to develop. Sometimes that desire to get a big plot going pulls away from the characters - not here :D
Everyone else has said what I would like to, so!! Thanks for this anon!!
OH WAIT - THAT ENTHUSIASTIC KISS!!! I would be silly not to mention. One of my favorite things from the whole exchange ♥
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The dynamic between Jun and Nino was perfect. Just the right amount of hesitance on Nino's part, understandable I think, and the right amount of flirting from Jun ;D What I loved was that even in the atmosphere of an action-like story, you gave the relationship time to develop. Sometimes that desire to get a big plot going pulls away from the characters - not here :D
Everyone else has said what I would like to, so!! Thanks for this anon!!
OH WAIT - THAT ENTHUSIASTIC KISS!!! I would be silly not to mention. One of my favorite things from the whole exchange ♥