Wow, this is so good. I don't think I can think of all the things that I thoroughly enjoyed about this even now after reading it. There are so many wonderful details, I don't even know where to begin. <3
The entire composition of this in itself is incredible. The story-line keeps shining through without ever revealing too much and taking things away. That really is remarkable. The imagery is also amazing. So many strong pictures and the scenes filled with so many emotions without things ever getting over the top. You just feel with the characters. ^^ The word composition is so considerate and at the same time so naturally woven into the text. To put it simple, reading this is a real joy.
Okay, from here I'll just point out some personal highlights: * Aiba, the drag queen. I LOVE THAT!!! <3 XD <3 * Ohno's strength and Juntoshi connection * The way Jun and Nino connect, the bitter-sweet love that forms between them, the way Nino sees right into Jun's heart... it's breathtaking * Jun's lost character and how Nino decides that he doesn't have to be a shining star for him to love Jun * The optimistic look into a hopefully brighter future
The story rolls out so smoothly, the plot placed together bit by bit, like a puzzle really, taking shape slowly and then revealing a final picture. I enjoyed reading this so much, thanks for the effort you put into it, it's truly amazing. :D
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The entire composition of this in itself is incredible. The story-line keeps shining through without ever revealing too much and taking things away. That really is remarkable. The imagery is also amazing. So many strong pictures and the scenes filled with so many emotions without things ever getting over the top. You just feel with the characters. ^^ The word composition is so considerate and at the same time so naturally woven into the text. To put it simple, reading this is a real joy.
Okay, from here I'll just point out some personal highlights:
* Aiba, the drag queen. I LOVE THAT!!! <3 XD <3
* Ohno's strength and Juntoshi connection
* The way Jun and Nino connect, the bitter-sweet love that forms between them, the way Nino sees right into Jun's heart... it's breathtaking
* Jun's lost character and how Nino decides that he doesn't have to be a shining star for him to love Jun
* The optimistic look into a hopefully brighter future
The story rolls out so smoothly, the plot placed together bit by bit, like a puzzle really, taking shape slowly and then revealing a final picture. I enjoyed reading this so much, thanks for the effort you put into it, it's truly amazing. :D