This was such a fun read!! You already had me excited from the plot alone, but it got better and better as it went along. I adored the fact that Sho was so considerate and generous to all of the contestants. Especially given how many of them left him for other people or purposes (poor Sho-chan!), he was so understanding. ♥
I have to say, one of the best things for me was how realistic you were about Sho's feelings. With genuinely interesting people around, and only knowing them for a short while, it was totally fair for him to not be in love with Nino immediately. I was glad he considered his choices carefully - it meant a more meaningful victory for Nino at the end. :D
I'm weak for Junba so that side plot was A+
Nino's feelings developing naturally, the silly and over-the-top moments with the yakuza and the concert, I was laughing. But the best, absolutely best part of the whole story was that everyone needed to touch that butt!!! Sho being resigned to it at the end had me cackling.
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I have to say, one of the best things for me was how realistic you were about Sho's feelings. With genuinely interesting people around, and only knowing them for a short while, it was totally fair for him to not be in love with Nino immediately. I was glad he considered his choices carefully - it meant a more meaningful victory for Nino at the end. :D
I'm weak for Junba so that side plot was A+
Nino's feelings developing naturally, the silly and over-the-top moments with the yakuza and the concert, I was laughing. But the best, absolutely best part of the whole story was that everyone needed to touch that butt!!! Sho being resigned to it at the end had me cackling.
Great job, anon!!