The world you created was awesome. I LOVE your Jun. I love how he's absolutely easy to love - Jun tends to be guarded and aloof in fics and I love how you included that in his past but he's just so charming, sweet yet dorky in this one -- ALL while being absolutely close to what I imagine Jun to be like.
The kiss was so lovely. It was unexpected but not unbelievable. I love how you timed it - you made us feel like Nino who sort of knew it was coming but not exactly at THAT moment.
The relationship was beautiful. I LOVE how they worked so well together but because they weren't completely honest with each other, it broke down. It seemed like sho's fault but under the surface, Nino was also keeping his own demons hidden EVEN if he told sho.
This was a piece of art. Thank you! It's not for me but I loved every moment of it. In fact, I'm rereading it to see what I've missed the first time round! (Like sho calling Nino Nino the very first time)
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The world you created was awesome. I LOVE your Jun. I love how he's absolutely easy to love - Jun tends to be guarded and aloof in fics and I love how you included that in his past but he's just so charming, sweet yet dorky in this one -- ALL while being absolutely close to what I imagine Jun to be like.
The kiss was so lovely. It was unexpected but not unbelievable. I love how you timed it - you made us feel like Nino who sort of knew it was coming but not exactly at THAT moment.
The relationship was beautiful. I LOVE how they worked so well together but because they weren't completely honest with each other, it broke down. It seemed like sho's fault but under the surface, Nino was also keeping his own demons hidden EVEN if he told sho.
This was a piece of art. Thank you! It's not for me but I loved every moment of it. In fact, I'm rereading it to see what I've missed the first time round! (Like sho calling Nino Nino the very first time)