First, I have to confess, I am not a fan of OT3 and I usually only read them when they come across my way during the Ninoexchange. Second, I have to confess that IF I would be a fan of OT3, Nino/Sho/Ohno would probably be what comes closest to that for me. Third, I have to confess that this is definitely one of the very very few OT3-stories that somehow actually work for me, so please consider this as a huge compliment.
Maybe the main reason for this is that Sakumiya is my OT3 and you portrayed their established relationship so so well that I just felt like home, even if a third person entered the pairing on the way – and who can dislike Ohno, especially when he's such a cutie as you portrayed him as?. I loved the soulmate tattoo-thing with the non-sparked tattoos stressing everyone involved until FINALLY the solution surfaced. I was waiting for the three to touch at the same time since the beginning, knowing what would happen and I wasn't sure if I was going to like it or not but yes, in the end I really did. I thought you'll make it happen during their mission of saving Sho, I was a little bit surprised you dragged it out until the celebration but it fit well. I really suffered with the characters here, how unfairly treated by destiny they must have felt, it's incredible, unbearable. I totally understand Nino's frustration, Ohno's sadness and desperation as well as Sho's final outburst when they finally FINALLY sparked!!! I was so happy for them, I even cried a little! T^T
To be honest, what I enjoyed most of this story is definitely the setting. The agent stuff and the action, their missions, that was really awesome! The back flash scene in the city with Nino trying to deactivate the bomb, the stress, then Ohno's appearance and their escape with the car, that was an amazingly well written action scene and one of my favorite scenes throughout the whole story.
Of course, I also have to mention the smut. Oh hell yes, the smut. Since I'm not that much into OT3, I'm also not into threesomes but again, thanks to the chemistry of the OT3, it worked very well here and I really enjoyed it. It was something unusual for me to read, but it was damned sexy!
So to sum it up, thank you very much for sharing this story and making me enjoy an OT3. As I said, that's not easy to achieve! XD
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Maybe the main reason for this is that Sakumiya is my OT3 and you portrayed their established relationship so so well that I just felt like home, even if a third person entered the pairing on the way – and who can dislike Ohno, especially when he's such a cutie as you portrayed him as?. I loved the soulmate tattoo-thing with the non-sparked tattoos stressing everyone involved until FINALLY the solution surfaced. I was waiting for the three to touch at the same time since the beginning, knowing what would happen and I wasn't sure if I was going to like it or not but yes, in the end I really did. I thought you'll make it happen during their mission of saving Sho, I was a little bit surprised you dragged it out until the celebration but it fit well. I really suffered with the characters here, how unfairly treated by destiny they must have felt, it's incredible, unbearable. I totally understand Nino's frustration, Ohno's sadness and desperation as well as Sho's final outburst when they finally FINALLY sparked!!! I was so happy for them, I even cried a little! T^T
To be honest, what I enjoyed most of this story is definitely the setting. The agent stuff and the action, their missions, that was really awesome! The back flash scene in the city with Nino trying to deactivate the bomb, the stress, then Ohno's appearance and their escape with the car, that was an amazingly well written action scene and one of my favorite scenes throughout the whole story.
Of course, I also have to mention the smut. Oh hell yes, the smut. Since I'm not that much into OT3, I'm also not into threesomes but again, thanks to the chemistry of the OT3, it worked very well here and I really enjoyed it. It was something unusual for me to read, but it was damned sexy!
So to sum it up, thank you very much for sharing this story and making me enjoy an OT3. As I said, that's not easy to achieve! XD