I'm surprised there aren't more comments on this yet! Anon, what a gem!!
There were so many moments through this fic that I found myself holding my breath. You had this really intense way of describing everyone's emotions and it really pulled at my heartstrings. I was SO DISTRESSED for poor Ohno and his loneliness. I understood why Nino felt the way he did and why he was nervous about potentially losing 2 people (which was explored wonderfully both emotionally and more literally with the terrorist plots). I think my favorite scene was when they sparked, because everyone's different ways of reacting were so perfect. Sho needing to let out his frustration - very Sho - Nino in shock, Ohno crying. It made a supernatural, magical thing feel more real so I have to give you super ultra kudos for that.
Sho was a curious mixture of prude and wanton that made Nino ever more smitten - YESSSSS. Yes.
I was already in love with the domestic scene that opened the fic and how lovely the descriptions were, even with that hint of Ohno missing. And then the ending, going back to that domestic moment where Nino doesn't have to wonder anymore, so sweet! I think it was really important that they had that conversation also about how they would choose one another even without destiny's blessing. In that way, I think the sparking happened exactly when it was meant to ♥
You really built something here, I was impressed. :D Thanks!
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There were so many moments through this fic that I found myself holding my breath. You had this really intense way of describing everyone's emotions and it really pulled at my heartstrings. I was SO DISTRESSED for poor Ohno and his loneliness. I understood why Nino felt the way he did and why he was nervous about potentially losing 2 people (which was explored wonderfully both emotionally and more literally with the terrorist plots). I think my favorite scene was when they sparked, because everyone's different ways of reacting were so perfect. Sho needing to let out his frustration - very Sho - Nino in shock, Ohno crying. It made a supernatural, magical thing feel more real so I have to give you super ultra kudos for that.
Sho was a curious mixture of prude and wanton that made Nino ever more smitten - YESSSSS. Yes.
I was already in love with the domestic scene that opened the fic and how lovely the descriptions were, even with that hint of Ohno missing. And then the ending, going back to that domestic moment where Nino doesn't have to wonder anymore, so sweet! I think it was really important that they had that conversation also about how they would choose one another even without destiny's blessing. In that way, I think the sparking happened exactly when it was meant to ♥
You really built something here, I was impressed. :D Thanks!