I loved the way this was written, it felt like snapshots? if that makes sense. like a bunch of Polaroids lining up to be one narrative
Aiba getting kidnapped was the best omg. he's the most laidback kidnapped person in the world, with his pancakes.
I liked the idea of Jun for once being the one that wants to do something that isn't necessarily the most legal thing in the world and roping Nino into it. I feel like it's usually the other way around, so this was really refreshing. And the hints of something that could've been between Jun and Nino made me want to see more.
And Ohmiya are the tiniest magnets !! I thought that was cute. Though my boss walked in when I was reading That Scene so I have to go back and reread it later >>

And yes, Sakurai does look great in jeans.