http://katsutamu.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] katsutamu.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ninoexchange 2016-06-23 12:46 pm (UTC)

This was such a fun read! I'm loving the thieves/criminal trope; Nino and Jun are just so slick, so debonair, so them. At first, I didn't even get that Nino and Jun had superpowers, but by the first third of the story, I was marveling at how subtly you wove that into this story, and their mutant powers seemed to be a natural matter of course. I smiled when Nino figured that Jun was messing with him with the whole "kidnapping" of Aiba, and I really like that Jun ended up being the mastermind of the heist (with some help from Sho, it seems? ah, I loved how Sho was the police officer who was willing to blur the lines a little with the criminals). Ohmiya magnets <3 After I read that revelation of Ohno being a magnet, I thought immediately back to the first time Ohno and Nino are in an elevator, and Nino notices that Ohno stands a little closer than normal and it made so much sense now! Details, anon, you're killing it on the details :)
Thank you for writing this story!

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