Errrrrbody's been talking about this one on Twitter (at least all the depraved awesome people I follow), so I knew I wanted to save this one and savor it fully. It was definitely the right call.
God, I just loved every single thing about this - so much hot sex (oh wow, there was so much hot sex in this, hat's off to you) contrasted with so much genuine emotion. I love how the story progressed, how Nino slowly fell for Jun and it turned his life upside down. I really enjoyed how things weren't smooth, how they acted rashly but by the end had actually talked things through, had met each other on even terms. I really cared for both Nino and Jun and really wanted that happy ending for them.
The way you wrote Nino's mostly undefinable money kink was really well done. It is what it is in this story and I also have to say that I liked that he didn't give it up?? In a lot of stories like this, you figure the 'prostitute' character will give all that up cold turkey once they find 'the one' who convinces them to quit. That Nino continues his work and that Jun accepts it for the most part was really different and interesting. I just loved when Jun was confessing to Nino and saying he'd buy him anything and Nino explaining that Jun would come to resent it - I was so happy to see a scene like that. Even with their difficulties, neither of them was forcing the other to drastically change their life and that's extraordinary to read.
You did an amazing job with this. All the emotional ups and downs I could possibly want and so. much. sex. Bless your heart, Author-san!
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Errrrrbody's been talking about this one on Twitter (at least all the depraved awesome people I follow), so I knew I wanted to save this one and savor it fully. It was definitely the right call.
God, I just loved every single thing about this - so much hot sex (oh wow, there was so much hot sex in this, hat's off to you) contrasted with so much genuine emotion. I love how the story progressed, how Nino slowly fell for Jun and it turned his life upside down. I really enjoyed how things weren't smooth, how they acted rashly but by the end had actually talked things through, had met each other on even terms. I really cared for both Nino and Jun and really wanted that happy ending for them.
The way you wrote Nino's mostly undefinable money kink was really well done. It is what it is in this story and I also have to say that I liked that he didn't give it up?? In a lot of stories like this, you figure the 'prostitute' character will give all that up cold turkey once they find 'the one' who convinces them to quit. That Nino continues his work and that Jun accepts it for the most part was really different and interesting. I just loved when Jun was confessing to Nino and saying he'd buy him anything and Nino explaining that Jun would come to resent it - I was so happy to see a scene like that. Even with their difficulties, neither of them was forcing the other to drastically change their life and that's extraordinary to read.
You did an amazing job with this. All the emotional ups and downs I could possibly want and so. much. sex. Bless your heart, Author-san!