In general, I found it very, very surprising that your Nino is spot-on. Nino is the one Arashi member whose persona is closest to my personality, so if I can relate to Nino in a fic to a certain extent, it will feel right to me. And this was more than that. In many cases before I proceeded, a part of me was kind of predicting what was going to happen, and sometimes, what Nino did was EXACTLY what I imagined he would. It’s like you went inside my head and turned what you saw there into words.
I knew what I asked for and naturally, I had expectations on how it would go. YOU MET THOSE. Like, I knew this was going to start with “no feelings involved, just business” that would escalate to something more (which was a given, because since when did that NOT happen), but to witness that gradually unfold was the interesting part. I knew what I expected, I’ve said that, but I didn’t know the details on how it would go.
Which is why I’m beyond thrilled and grateful that this story was delivered in a way that didn’t dodge the issues that ought to go with it—insecurity, doubt, attachment, the warped perception of love on Jun's part (it!!! was!!! not!!! bypassed!!! I AM ALIVE), even the ownership (A+ I AM SO THRILLED). Given the setup, such were predictable, but to see them done and executed perfectly had me reeling to the point I just kept questioning, “holy shit, did someone really write this for me?” as I read one line after another.
I wish I can be more eloquent to express just how much I adored this, but I don’t want to quote everything back at you (you’re the writer; you know what you did). I maintain what I said in the first part of this comment: I never really thought I’d get to read sugar daddy Matsumoto mere months after I thought of it. This was a gift; the moment I read the header I was all “the planets are aligned”. I didn’t get one part but THREE parts of an engaging story, and I want to shower you with gratitude, praise, and love. I have a feeling I know who you are (if I’m right about this then LOL), but I’ll wait until reveals before I give you a couple more thanks that you so greatly deserve.
♥♥♥♥♥ I only have virtual hearts to offer, and if I could, I’d fill this comment box with them. This was truly a fantastic read. Thank you.
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I knew what I asked for and naturally, I had expectations on how it would go. YOU MET THOSE. Like, I knew this was going to start with “no feelings involved, just business” that would escalate to something more (which was a given, because since when did that NOT happen), but to witness that gradually unfold was the interesting part. I knew what I expected, I’ve said that, but I didn’t know the details on how it would go.
Which is why I’m beyond thrilled and grateful that this story was delivered in a way that didn’t dodge the issues that ought to go with it—insecurity, doubt, attachment, the warped perception of love on Jun's part (it!!! was!!! not!!! bypassed!!! I AM ALIVE), even the ownership (A+ I AM SO THRILLED). Given the setup, such were predictable, but to see them done and executed perfectly had me reeling to the point I just kept questioning, “holy shit, did someone really write this for me?” as I read one line after another.
I wish I can be more eloquent to express just how much I adored this, but I don’t want to quote everything back at you (you’re the writer; you know what you did). I maintain what I said in the first part of this comment: I never really thought I’d get to read sugar daddy Matsumoto mere months after I thought of it. This was a gift; the moment I read the header I was all “the planets are aligned”. I didn’t get one part but THREE parts of an engaging story, and I want to shower you with gratitude, praise, and love. I have a feeling I know who you are (if I’m right about this then LOL), but I’ll wait until reveals before I give you a couple more thanks that you so greatly deserve.
♥♥♥♥♥ I only have virtual hearts to offer, and if I could, I’d fill this comment box with them. This was truly a fantastic read. Thank you.