http://nicefinalbeam.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] nicefinalbeam.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ninoexchange 2016-06-17 02:31 pm (UTC)

This is so golden, author, I don't even know where to begin! I love that you played on every single sense in this story, with smelling the flowers and touching the boxes, the colors and the atmosphere around Nino in his shop - it really helped transport me to the world of the story. It also made me extremely envious, because I think I'd love that life ♥

I appreciated that there was just enough underlying drama and tension without it being over the top, since they were really only just starting to get to know one another. Honestly, I feel like I can't express my flailing around properly with words because I just want to CAPSLOCK !!! at you about how adorable Sho was and how well I think you captured Nino's personality here. His card to Sho with the flowers was ABSOLUTELY PERFECT.

And then I think the story can't get any better and you have them kiss in the rain!? It's like... ah, it's almost a cliche but cliches are cliches for a REASON because they make you swoon. This was wonderful start to finish! :D

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