I have been awake for 22 hours (not that I could leave a comment that's worthy of this fic even if I was well-rested) but I am emotional about how wonderful this is.
The world is so completely fleshed out and it's 8Uppers but it totally ISN'T, it's its own beautiful world with Aiba the florist and Nino the crossdresser and Maru/Yasu/Hina owning a coffee shop and WEST with their AKAN Love and I am just honestly so overwhelmed and emotional. If I could write any fic in the world, this is the fic I would love to be able to write. But I didn't, you did, and it is beyond anything I could have ever DREAMED.
The side snippets round everything out and add so much. Obviously the story stands on its own but those little snippets of context and background make the world you built come together so so well. The Yasu/Baru snippet made me cry a little, I can't even lie.
Plus! Your language choices leave me utterly in awe! The descriptions and the metaphors are so well-written I'm jealous. I wish I could write like this.
Thank you a million times for this, anon. I can't put how much I love this in words, really, but I tried. Take this comment and multiply it by infinity and maybe it comes close. Thank you!!
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I have been awake for 22 hours (not that I could leave a comment that's worthy of this fic even if I was well-rested) but I am emotional about how wonderful this is.
The world is so completely fleshed out and it's 8Uppers but it totally ISN'T, it's its own beautiful world with Aiba the florist and Nino the crossdresser and Maru/Yasu/Hina owning a coffee shop and WEST with their AKAN Love and I am just honestly so overwhelmed and emotional. If I could write any fic in the world, this is the fic I would love to be able to write. But I didn't, you did, and it is beyond anything I could have ever DREAMED.
The side snippets round everything out and add so much. Obviously the story stands on its own but those little snippets of context and background make the world you built come together so so well. The Yasu/Baru snippet made me cry a little, I can't even lie.
Plus! Your language choices leave me utterly in awe! The descriptions and the metaphors are so well-written I'm jealous. I wish I could write like this.
Thank you a million times for this, anon. I can't put how much I love this in words, really, but I tried. Take this comment and multiply it by infinity and maybe it comes close. Thank you!!