I would have loved to write every chapter my comments, but I'll just write them all here.
First off, congratulations to your successful story! The title piqued my interest so, I decided to read your fic. It was amazing. I loved the way vampires weren't 'twilight-y' and it's just the way I would have written it (if only I write well just like you). I know that I wouldn't have a coherent comment, since I'm at work as I write this.
Enter the bloody comment... The detailed description of each part was concise, not too long, but not short. The adjectives that you have used were brilliant. I can imagine all the parts like I was watching a movie. The distinction of each persona was really fantastic! I wasn't disappointed even though in the ending, Nino decided that he really didn't want to be a vampire at all. Each character was written well. What else? insert jazzy music background here I can't really think anymore, but I again, congratulate you.
Just finished reading
First off, congratulations to your successful story! The title piqued my interest so, I decided to read your fic. It was amazing.
I loved the way vampires weren't 'twilight-y' and it's just the way I would have written it (if only I write well just like you).
I know that I wouldn't have a coherent comment, since I'm at work as I write this.
Enter the bloody comment... The detailed description of each part was concise, not too long, but not short. The adjectives that you have used were brilliant. I can imagine all the parts like I was watching a movie. The distinction of each persona was really fantastic! I wasn't disappointed even though in the ending, Nino decided that he really didn't want to be a vampire at all. Each character was written well. What else? insert jazzy music background here I can't really think anymore, but I again, congratulate you.
PS. The sex scenes were yummy. :)