http://yumenosete.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] yumenosete.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ninoexchange 2015-06-30 04:14 pm (UTC)

I'm already sleepy for keeping a vampire schedule just to comment on this, but this is totally worth it ♥

the world is great, but I think I love your characters the best. Details, minor or not, that brought them together were woven perfectly. The back stories make the characters what they are and make us understand what influences their choice. What's more, I love how you reveal them slowly so that they would all fall perfectly in place. Jun would want to be a vampire for Sho and himself, and Nino wouldn't. It's all perfectly believable and great.

I probably would want a snippet of how Nino would deal with two vampires once Jun is turned, but that is just a selfishness on my part XD

excellent piece of fiction, author ♥

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