This story is just AWESOME! I enjoyed it SO much, you can't imagine! The writing style is great (I usually don't like first person that much but here it was great, so humorous and fitting, great!), it has the right portion of being intense, interesting, humorous and fascinating and you really managed to combine lots of genres here, that's really cool.
I usually might not have read a zombie story (since I'm not a fan of them) but the summary made me curious and the pretty rare Nino/Toma combi too! I have to say that you managed to give me a whole new image of zombies with your unique and really interesting and fresh concept for them (and maybe I like zombies more now, at least I LOVE zombie!Nino XD haha). The idea of adapting the feelings, habits and memories of the people whose brains you eat as a zombie, is just brilliant and it works soooo well here! It's fascinating and awesome! I liked the flashbacks of Nino, that made the whole thing really interesting (and I felt so sorry for Nino, being so empathic, even if just temporarily, must be horrible... and I feel sorry for Aoi too°! T___T poor girl...)
I also have to admit that I love detective stories and such a lot so cop!Toma was just love! It reminded me a little on Ouroboros but in your story, Toma is even cooler! I loved his character so much here! I loved how Nino and Toma held those typical conversations to come closer to the solution of the crime and how they did the questionings of the involved people and everything. And the ending caught me in surprise, so Toma scouted Nino? That's really cool! So now I hope he joins Toma (whatever of a mysterious cop(?) he might be and whoever he might work for XD)! I really really love the Toma-Nino-detective-combi! <3 <3
Also - Ohno! XD His role is just great and interesting - dealing with brains and having contact to mysterious people like Toma! I really like this not really involved on the surface but in reality pulling the strings behind the scenes Ohno character and I often tend to write him like that too so it felt really comfortable and familiar somehow haha :D
Inohara- I knew he was the killer!!! Even if you did a good job in distracting my suspicion and making me doupt in between! It was like ok wait, now we have Inohara as a suspect, we have Okada as a suspect, hm maybe it was Yuriko? My crime/detective story-loving brain had a big bunch of fun here, puzzling myself over the possibilities but In the end I'm happy that I was right with my suspicion though! Yeah!
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I usually might not have read a zombie story (since I'm not a fan of them) but the summary made me curious and the pretty rare Nino/Toma combi too! I have to say that you managed to give me a whole new image of zombies with your unique and really interesting and fresh concept for them (and maybe I like zombies more now, at least I LOVE zombie!Nino XD haha). The idea of adapting the feelings, habits and memories of the people whose brains you eat as a zombie, is just brilliant and it works soooo well here! It's fascinating and awesome! I liked the flashbacks of Nino, that made the whole thing really interesting (and I felt so sorry for Nino, being so empathic, even if just temporarily, must be horrible... and I feel sorry for Aoi too°! T___T poor girl...)
I also have to admit that I love detective stories and such a lot so cop!Toma was just love! It reminded me a little on Ouroboros but in your story, Toma is even cooler! I loved his character so much here! I loved how Nino and Toma held those typical conversations to come closer to the solution of the crime and how they did the questionings of the involved people and everything. And the ending caught me in surprise, so Toma scouted Nino? That's really cool! So now I hope he joins Toma (whatever of a mysterious cop(?) he might be and whoever he might work for XD)! I really really love the Toma-Nino-detective-combi! <3 <3
Also - Ohno! XD His role is just great and interesting - dealing with brains and having contact to mysterious people like Toma! I really like this not really involved on the surface but in reality pulling the strings behind the scenes Ohno character and I often tend to write him like that too so it felt really comfortable and familiar somehow haha :D
Inohara- I knew he was the killer!!! Even if you did a good job in distracting my suspicion and making me doupt in between! It was like ok wait, now we have Inohara as a suspect, we have Okada as a suspect, hm maybe it was Yuriko? My crime/detective story-loving brain had a big bunch of fun here, puzzling myself over the possibilities but In the end I'm happy that I was right with my suspicion though! Yeah!
Great job! Thanks for writing this! <3