http://jadeswallow.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] jadeswallow.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ninoexchange 2013-06-23 07:24 pm (UTC)

Ah~~ This is such a joy to read. I love how you write Nino with gustatory synaesthesia because of his obvious lack of interests with food, and then pair him up with Ohkura, the glutton. The way Ohkura tried to gain Nino's attention is absolutely delightful, eating three ice cream at once - it's so Ohkura, and giving Nino free food. Hamburgers, even. Wooing Nino, he's doing it right XD Oh, and I adore every cameos you put here, escpecially Maru the poor fanboy, and how you slip in Nino's opinions about all of their names near the end. Murakami does taste like eggplant and Sho is like strawberry daifuku!!

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