This has such a bittersweet feeling to it, and it's so beautifully written. I love everyone's characterization, the way Ohno doesn't quite fit when he returns (that line about the space they left being for elementary school Ohno, and high school Ohno is too big -- SO GREAT), the scuffles they throw themselves into, and Nino's big circle. I love the way Aiba gets played with by Chikako, and how Jun and Mayu end up staying together. And, of course, Ohno at the end. ♥
This has such a wonderful feel to it all the way through. Thank you for sharing~!
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This has such a wonderful feel to it all the way through. Thank you for sharing~!