This was fantastic. Usually in the superpower fics I come across, there's a focus on what the superpowers can do and not so much about what it's like to suddenly have superpowers -- and definitely not in the way that you've portrayed it here, with Nino being so overwhelmed by it, having trouble controlling it and being frustrated at himself about it. Really powerful stuff. The anecdotes from his childhood were a lovely way to show that his problems with water have plagued him for a while, and omg the bullying ;___; heartbreaking! I also hardcore loved the supporting roles of the other Arashi members here: Aiba driving Nino home, and Sho holding Nino while Nino had a panic attack -- god I am so curious about how much they know about Nino. I sort of read it as they all have powers, but Jun's the only one who doesn't realize yet -- so maybe it's an age thing? Like, right before the 29th birthday, you manifest your powers? So cool. OH and I also loved the hopeful flavour of the end! Nino being more sure of himself and feeling better about it all because he's not alone and has Arashi there to help him. Aaaaaah perfect ♥
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