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go・mush・room ([personal profile] gomushroom) wrote in [community profile] ninoexchange 2020-06-29 11:25 am (UTC)

Wow! I really love this <3! I love that it's about a coffee shop but it's not just ordinary. Everyone is there! I truly love the pace, how everything is slow and meaningful. We don't get the usual joined at hips Ohmiya and seeing both of them stumbling over their early relationship is so great. I'm smiling over so many great dialogues between them, and then Nino with the rest--and when the other three finally had it enough (even with the bets and all) and locked these two cutes in Nino's office I was laughing so much!

I also love how you show that Nino is verrry good with customers because that's just so him. And for Ohno to mumble and trying his best to work his way around the shop, totally adorable <3! There's a lingering sense of something--and I don't blame Ohno for suspecting--and with Matsu-nii and Nagase and Ueda hahaha his suspicion is totally valid. Also, I have to admit that I wasn't able to hold back my aaaawwwwww when Ohno presented his sketch to Nino as;dlkjasldaj. The sweetest--and any Ohno's art in any fic is A+++ And I love how Nino finally asked straight up and they settle thing between them. The ending is just SO SWEET, and it feels sweeter since we have the building tension from the beginning. It took me a while to read this but finishing this feels so satisfying, and made me crave for some more cute Ohmiya! Thank you so much for this beautiful story <3!

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