Hello. I'm really sorry for the late review. I finished my report and also my mid-exam. Apparently, I didn't have time to review this even on the weekends because I was too tired. Anyway.... let's talk about the fanfic! :3
First of all, thank you for writing Sakumiya for me instead of Matsumiya or Aimiya HAHAHAH XD I really expect Sakumiya at least! I really miss reading them and this is my first time reading a Sakumiya fic after a year or so. Second of all, I'm SOOOOO happy that you used at least 3 of the prompts that I gave in the form. I was so shocked that you made drunk!Sho and at the same time, the secretary x assistant. I assume that you watched 'What's Wrong with Secretary Kim?' then? I hope you enjoy and finish the drama soon ^^
I feel like you can read my mind, anon. You made Ohno as the owner of the izakaya and that's what I've been wanting! The idea was already like a year ago and I'm glad that you made it for me at last (I'm sorry HAHAHA but really, how you write about drunk!Sho was on point!). Ah, you also put the lost journal prompt! I'm really happy~ Funny how you actually combine all of the prompts but everything is still make sense. You wrote an amazing piece of art.
As for the secretary x assistant, I'm really surprised that you make Sho as a jerk at first. I really like it, even if it isn't fluff at first, I feel like the ending compensate on what and why Sho did it. And also, I'm happy to see Matsumiya and how Jun is very funny in the story. Damn, I laughed so hard when I read his 'umbrella' poem and Nino was like "So I'm supposed to be an umbrella, huh? Does that mean I'm supposed to catch all the rain for him and he'll stay dry?" XD Jun being flirty made me day soooo much. Ah, I like how Aiba is being a supportive friend but also likes to embarrass Nino a lot pfft.
I think I don't have to tell you that you wrote Nino perfectly in this, right? Because you do! Even though Nino suffers a lot because of Sho ahahaha. At least it's still worth it with the happy ending ;) I find it really sweet how Sho still likes him even when he had to pretend not to know Nino. I really love the ending on how they live together and Sho told his family about Nino and also what he actually wanted for his life. I feel like Sakurai Shun in here is so kind and he tries to understand his employees is one of the things that I like about your fanfic. A good work ethic is needed in this kind of society (even if it's just fiction hahaha). And also, thank you for adding Keiko here because I love her so much and also, a little of Satomi-chan! :3 All of my favorite people are here and I feel awwww.
One of my favorite scene is actually when Sho was drunk and confessed a lot of things to Nino, even he was actually conscious. I think that's really sweet. Another one would be when Sho confessed about the truth to Nino. Damn, I was really emotional :") Umm, and also, Sho's jealousy whenever Jun flirts with Nino is something too XD Hmm, what else? Oh, oh! the way Sho proposed Nino is so cuteee? Aaaaaa, that is a propose goal I swear >< Simple and very touching. I really feel uwu uwu uwu uwu. I really love everything that you wrote in this fanfic! <3
Oh, one thing. Nino's psychosomatic condition is very relatable to me. Thank you for putting that in the story. I guess you don't know about this and it's a coincidence. I actually have it myself but it's more on allergy and not as bad as Nino. When I'm stressed, I will get allergy reaction such as rashes and also deep cuts on my fingers which made it hard for me to write and move them freely sometimes (especially when i played the piano). The reaction will come at night when I'm asleep, unlike Nino who will get the reaction right away on his neck. The doctors said I have atopic dermatitis and it's incurable. Every doctor said that it will be gone after I'm 18 but guess what? I still have to live with it HAHA. Ugh. But anyway... It's getting better now, compared when I was still in puberty. So, it is very relatable for someone who has similar situation. I feel like I understand Nino's pain :")
Anon, thank you so much for writing a masterpiece for me. I'm really bad at writing reviews but please bear with me XD I really appreciate on what you wrote. I bet there are blood, tears and sweat on writing this 75,500 words fanfic. I adore the bittersweet love of Nino and Sho here. You made me cry when Sho actually forgotten about Nino and also when he told the truth T___T I know I've been saying this for couple of times but... I'm so so happy and I'm very grateful to get a beautiful fanfic for my first NinoEx. Thank you so so so much, Anon. God bless you for writing a masterpiece! YOU ARE THE BEST <3 I hope you write more Sakumiya fanfics in the near future :) お疲れ様でした！本当にありがとう〜
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First of all, thank you for writing Sakumiya for me instead of Matsumiya or Aimiya HAHAHAH XD I really expect Sakumiya at least! I really miss reading them and this is my first time reading a Sakumiya fic after a year or so. Second of all, I'm SOOOOO happy that you used at least 3 of the prompts that I gave in the form. I was so shocked that you made drunk!Sho and at the same time, the secretary x assistant. I assume that you watched 'What's Wrong with Secretary Kim?' then? I hope you enjoy and finish the drama soon ^^
I feel like you can read my mind, anon. You made Ohno as the owner of the izakaya and that's what I've been wanting! The idea was already like a year ago and I'm glad that you made it for me at last (I'm sorry HAHAHA but really, how you write about drunk!Sho was on point!). Ah, you also put the lost journal prompt! I'm really happy~ Funny how you actually combine all of the prompts but everything is still make sense. You wrote an amazing piece of art.
As for the secretary x assistant, I'm really surprised that you make Sho as a jerk at first. I really like it, even if it isn't fluff at first, I feel like the ending compensate on what and why Sho did it. And also, I'm happy to see Matsumiya and how Jun is very funny in the story. Damn, I laughed so hard when I read his 'umbrella' poem and Nino was like "So I'm supposed to be an umbrella, huh? Does that mean I'm supposed to catch all the rain for him and he'll stay dry?" XD Jun being flirty made me day soooo much. Ah, I like how Aiba is being a supportive friend but also likes to embarrass Nino a lot pfft.
I think I don't have to tell you that you wrote Nino perfectly in this, right? Because you do! Even though Nino suffers a lot because of Sho ahahaha. At least it's still worth it with the happy ending ;) I find it really sweet how Sho still likes him even when he had to pretend not to know Nino. I really love the ending on how they live together and Sho told his family about Nino and also what he actually wanted for his life. I feel like Sakurai Shun in here is so kind and he tries to understand his employees is one of the things that I like about your fanfic. A good work ethic is needed in this kind of society (even if it's just fiction hahaha). And also, thank you for adding Keiko here because I love her so much and also, a little of Satomi-chan! :3 All of my favorite people are here and I feel awwww.
One of my favorite scene is actually when Sho was drunk and confessed a lot of things to Nino, even he was actually conscious. I think that's really sweet. Another one would be when Sho confessed about the truth to Nino. Damn, I was really emotional :") Umm, and also, Sho's jealousy whenever Jun flirts with Nino is something too XD Hmm, what else? Oh, oh! the way Sho proposed Nino is so cuteee? Aaaaaa, that is a propose goal I swear >< Simple and very touching. I really feel uwu uwu uwu uwu. I really love everything that you wrote in this fanfic! <3
Oh, one thing. Nino's psychosomatic condition is very relatable to me. Thank you for putting that in the story. I guess you don't know about this and it's a coincidence. I actually have it myself but it's more on allergy and not as bad as Nino. When I'm stressed, I will get allergy reaction such as rashes and also deep cuts on my fingers which made it hard for me to write and move them freely sometimes (especially when i played the piano). The reaction will come at night when I'm asleep, unlike Nino who will get the reaction right away on his neck. The doctors said I have atopic dermatitis and it's incurable. Every doctor said that it will be gone after I'm 18 but guess what? I still have to live with it HAHA. Ugh. But anyway... It's getting better now, compared when I was still in puberty. So, it is very relatable for someone who has similar situation. I feel like I understand Nino's pain :")
Anon, thank you so much for writing a masterpiece for me. I'm really bad at writing reviews but please bear with me XD I really appreciate on what you wrote. I bet there are blood, tears and sweat on writing this 75,500 words fanfic. I adore the bittersweet love of Nino and Sho here. You made me cry when Sho actually forgotten about Nino and also when he told the truth T___T I know I've been saying this for couple of times but... I'm so so happy and I'm very grateful to get a beautiful fanfic for my first NinoEx. Thank you so so so much, Anon. God bless you for writing a masterpiece! YOU ARE THE BEST <3 I hope you write more Sakumiya fanfics in the near future :) お疲れ様でした！本当にありがとう〜