I spend my last weekend to read this story and I feel like sjfhaskfhadsfk this is so good! As expected of my favorite sakumiya writer <3
Uuhhh there’s so many things I want to talk about, I hope I can put all of it in this comment. I don’t think I put things in order, sorry haha I guess I’m too excited :((((
First, the setting! Well, you GOT me there. You put Nino in such situations, both family situations and complicated situation with Sho ... OMG. I can’t. The feels are too much :((( poor Ninooooo :(((( not to mention that this story has a point of view from Nino, it made me went ‘Aaaaaaaaaahhh someone pls hug Nino’ somehow I’m proud of Nino in this story, because despite the problems he had, he still could live and go on :”)
Do I need to convey my anger towards Sho here? To be honest, to be reaaallly honest, I don’t really like how Sho scaredly avoided Nino and pretended he didn’t know Nino. When he confessed that I was like ?????????????????? DUDE WTF. You’re smart, you have the power play, you .... why you couldn’t face your own childhood friend slash crush? Sho should’ve noticed something weird in Nino in the first place at the introduction dinner (Sho even noticed the rash, but why he didn’t notice Nino’s expression?) Or is it that Nino hid his expression so well? Idk. But I feel like Sho is really a jerk here, sorry Sho, you’re smart and all but you’re a scaredy cat, leaving my poor Nino in his own miserable thoughts. God, I can’t believe it >:(
So somehow Sho had a crush on Nino too since back then? Looking at how Sho suddenly kissed Nino when he was drunk.
Well, at least Sho did it properly on Nino’s birthday, as he confessed and asked for a kiss politely. Why can’t Sho do it like that in the first place? The more I symphatize with Nino, the more I feel irritated at Sho. I mean, Nino is such a considerate person despite his own problems. He put other than his own first.
But well, the negative side of Nino is that he sometimes overthinking stuff. Not sometimes but often, I mean, everytime LOL. I don’t blame Nino for having such an overthinking habit, looking at his situations. He always has this melancholy feelings despite his snarky sayings.
I’m glad that Nino had Aiba <3 I always love Aiba and Nino’s relationship as best friend forever. I like how you potrait Aiba as a forever angel, always stay by Nino’s side whenever Nino needs someone to talk <3 Aiba is someone who can voice out Nino’s true feelings that Nino doesn’t want to admit it, and someone who supports Nino no matter what. Eventhough his talks sometimes aren’t reassuring and even worse Nino’s state (like at the first scene, when he shared his fun thoughts about how romantic Nino and Sho’s reunion would be, making Nino had too happy expectations while in fact, uhh, ...) but I still like Aiba as he simply voices out what he thinks without hesitation. That character really helps Nino who has difficulty to say what he thinks.
But yeah, to be honest I feel really irritated at Sho, because of his scaredy cat nature, and at the same time, Nino overthinking stuff. IT’S JUST ....... GOD. That’s why the two of them had complicated relationship at the very first! Why can’t they be honest sdfajkdhlaskfhkasfdh
I wonder why Sho decided to confess everything, like, EVERYTHING, including his feelings and his lies. See? After Sho confessed, everything became better, really better. HASHTAG SHOOK MY HEAD. It’s really good to see Sho finally voices out his true feelings.
Well, I know I know, Sho has his own problems too. But it doesn’t mean that he pushed all of his emotions inside, right? At least, if he didn’t want to be awkward, at least he didn’t have to pretend he didn’t know Nino!!! Omg. I really wonder the reason Sho suddenly blurted all of his secrets. Is it because of his jealousy towards Jun, after all?
Anyway, I love the banter between Sho and Nino during office (eventhough it made Nino stressed XD). Sho tried to be cocky and confident (and failed), while Nino tried to comply all of his orders.
About Jun, hahahahaha I also like how you potrait him as narcissist XDDD it’s a bit weird on how Jun suddenly had interest with Nino despite him being bully when they were children. And they already met when they’re grown ups like a year ago right? I wonder why Jun suddenly start liking Nino when Sho is around. THAT UMBRELLA POEM (and the narcisstic –M. J.– in the end XDD), I’m sorry Jun, I couldn’t help but laugh at it I’m XDDDDDD
The tension between Sho and Jun is so good, I can see why they fight each other naturally as they both have the same blockhead LOL. but at the same time, I think they can be good friends if the two of them lower their ego for abit. I mean, they have the same situation (heirs of the company etc), I’m sure they have a lot to discuss. That is, if Jun didn’t really bother with the fact that Sho has Nino now :p
OH! I appreciate your comedic lines that I found in some paragraphs xD here are my best favorite lines:
1. Nino’s wild thoughts about Sho. ‘... If their son had turned out only half as good looking as his parents, he must be the crush of half Europe.’ XD
2. Aiba when he heard that Sho didn’t recognize Nino. ‘ “What?!” something crashed and Aiba cursed. He must have let something drop.’ XDDDD
3. Nino when he was being openly flirted with Jun. ‘ “I am surrounded by narcissists ...,” he murmured’ XDDDDDDDDDD ‘"Please excuse my straightforwardness, but I can tell you for sure that if there is something that I definitely do not find attractive, it's complacency and narcissism," Nino dared to say’ NINO IS THE BEST, REALLY XD
Regarding the poem stuff, like the black note, it doesn’t really have any important impact on the story I think? But still, it’s so good to know that Sho is the owner (instead of umbrella Jun XDD). I can’t really imagine Sho as writers (poem writers) as he’s shown as snarky and sassy attitude in this story. But well, maybe deep in Sho’s heart he’s actually a really softie? XD <3
Your description when they were kissing!!!!!!! (Imitating how many Aiba put exclamation mark LOL) <3 they’re so sweet, too sweet I could melt <3 you really did a great job!
The ending is beautiful, I like how you end with Sho and Nino reunited and became one, with mountains of problems are still there to be solve. But now, they have each other, so they would tackle the problems together. I can see that images when I read the epilog :”) ah Sho and Nino just so cute together <3 I also like the propose in the end <3 wait, will they get married in other country? Sho said himself that Japan currently didn’t allow same-sex marriage right? XDD I smell a light and fun sequel here :p
P.S I still wonder the reason why Sho named his car ‘Emily’ xDDD I hope if he has a new car, he will name him ‘Nino’ or ‘Kazu’ <3
Thank you for writing this great story! It’s very dramatic and sappy, tbh it’s too much drama for me (who don’t really like heavy, teary drama in the first place dsfdsfds) (and made me feel so sorry about Nino, really! I still think you’re too far on putting Nino’s situations :((( ) but overall I love this story! I’m waiting for your another sakumiya series <3 (psst, cough colourful world cough)
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Uuhhh there’s so many things I want to talk about, I hope I can put all of it in this comment. I don’t think I put things in order, sorry haha I guess I’m too excited :((((
First, the setting! Well, you GOT me there. You put Nino in such situations, both family situations and complicated situation with Sho ... OMG. I can’t. The feels are too much :((( poor Ninooooo :(((( not to mention that this story has a point of view from Nino, it made me went ‘Aaaaaaaaaahhh someone pls hug Nino’ somehow I’m proud of Nino in this story, because despite the problems he had, he still could live and go on :”)
Do I need to convey my anger towards Sho here? To be honest, to be reaaallly honest, I don’t really like how Sho scaredly avoided Nino and pretended he didn’t know Nino. When he confessed that I was like ?????????????????? DUDE WTF. You’re smart, you have the power play, you .... why you couldn’t face your own childhood friend slash crush? Sho should’ve noticed something weird in Nino in the first place at the introduction dinner (Sho even noticed the rash, but why he didn’t notice Nino’s expression?) Or is it that Nino hid his expression so well? Idk. But I feel like Sho is really a jerk here, sorry Sho, you’re smart and all but you’re a scaredy cat, leaving my poor Nino in his own miserable thoughts. God, I can’t believe it >:(
So somehow Sho had a crush on Nino too since back then? Looking at how Sho suddenly kissed Nino when he was drunk.
Well, at least Sho did it properly on Nino’s birthday, as he confessed and asked for a kiss politely. Why can’t Sho do it like that in the first place? The more I symphatize with Nino, the more I feel irritated at Sho. I mean, Nino is such a considerate person despite his own problems. He put other than his own first.
But well, the negative side of Nino is that he sometimes overthinking stuff. Not sometimes but often, I mean, everytime LOL. I don’t blame Nino for having such an overthinking habit, looking at his situations. He always has this melancholy feelings despite his snarky sayings.
I’m glad that Nino had Aiba <3 I always love Aiba and Nino’s relationship as best friend forever. I like how you potrait Aiba as a forever angel, always stay by Nino’s side whenever Nino needs someone to talk <3 Aiba is someone who can voice out Nino’s true feelings that Nino doesn’t want to admit it, and someone who supports Nino no matter what. Eventhough his talks sometimes aren’t reassuring and even worse Nino’s state (like at the first scene, when he shared his fun thoughts about how romantic Nino and Sho’s reunion would be, making Nino had too happy expectations while in fact, uhh, ...) but I still like Aiba as he simply voices out what he thinks without hesitation. That character really helps Nino who has difficulty to say what he thinks.
But yeah, to be honest I feel really irritated at Sho, because of his scaredy cat nature, and at the same time, Nino overthinking stuff. IT’S JUST ....... GOD. That’s why the two of them had complicated relationship at the very first! Why can’t they be honest sdfajkdhlaskfhkasfdh
I wonder why Sho decided to confess everything, like, EVERYTHING, including his feelings and his lies. See? After Sho confessed, everything became better, really better. HASHTAG SHOOK MY HEAD. It’s really good to see Sho finally voices out his true feelings.
Well, I know I know, Sho has his own problems too. But it doesn’t mean that he pushed all of his emotions inside, right? At least, if he didn’t want to be awkward, at least he didn’t have to pretend he didn’t know Nino!!! Omg. I really wonder the reason Sho suddenly blurted all of his secrets. Is it because of his jealousy towards Jun, after all?
Anyway, I love the banter between Sho and Nino during office (eventhough it made Nino stressed XD). Sho tried to be cocky and confident (and failed), while Nino tried to comply all of his orders.
About Jun, hahahahaha I also like how you potrait him as narcissist XDDD it’s a bit weird on how Jun suddenly had interest with Nino despite him being bully when they were children. And they already met when they’re grown ups like a year ago right? I wonder why Jun suddenly start liking Nino when Sho is around. THAT UMBRELLA POEM (and the narcisstic –M. J.– in the end XDD), I’m sorry Jun, I couldn’t help but laugh at it I’m XDDDDDD
The tension between Sho and Jun is so good, I can see why they fight each other naturally as they both have the same blockhead LOL. but at the same time, I think they can be good friends if the two of them lower their ego for abit. I mean, they have the same situation (heirs of the company etc), I’m sure they have a lot to discuss. That is, if Jun didn’t really bother with the fact that Sho has Nino now :p
OH! I appreciate your comedic lines that I found in some paragraphs xD here are my best favorite lines:
1. Nino’s wild thoughts about Sho. ‘... If their son had turned out only half as good looking as his parents, he must be the crush of half Europe.’ XD
2. Aiba when he heard that Sho didn’t recognize Nino. ‘ “What?!” something crashed and Aiba cursed. He must have let something drop.’ XDDDD
3. Nino when he was being openly flirted with Jun. ‘ “I am surrounded by narcissists ...,” he murmured’ XDDDDDDDDDD
‘"Please excuse my straightforwardness, but I can tell you for sure that if there is something that I definitely do not find attractive, it's complacency and narcissism," Nino dared to say’ NINO IS THE BEST, REALLY XD
Regarding the poem stuff, like the black note, it doesn’t really have any important impact on the story I think? But still, it’s so good to know that Sho is the owner (instead of umbrella Jun XDD). I can’t really imagine Sho as writers (poem writers) as he’s shown as snarky and sassy attitude in this story. But well, maybe deep in Sho’s heart he’s actually a really softie? XD <3
Your description when they were kissing!!!!!!! (Imitating how many Aiba put exclamation mark LOL) <3 they’re so sweet, too sweet I could melt <3 you really did a great job!
The ending is beautiful, I like how you end with Sho and Nino reunited and became one, with mountains of problems are still there to be solve. But now, they have each other, so they would tackle the problems together. I can see that images when I read the epilog :”) ah Sho and Nino just so cute together <3 I also like the propose in the end <3 wait, will they get married in other country? Sho said himself that Japan currently didn’t allow same-sex marriage right? XDD I smell a light and fun sequel here :p
P.S I still wonder the reason why Sho named his car ‘Emily’ xDDD I hope if he has a new car, he will name him ‘Nino’ or ‘Kazu’ <3
Thank you for writing this great story! It’s very dramatic and sappy, tbh it’s too much drama for me (who don’t really like heavy, teary drama in the first place dsfdsfds) (and made me feel so sorry about Nino, really! I still think you’re too far on putting Nino’s situations :((( ) but overall I love this story! I’m waiting for your another sakumiya series <3 (psst, cough colourful world cough)