First, I would like to thank you so much for writing such a beautiful story <3 you captured the Blonde!Sho and Librarian!Nino well and I love both of their character! <3
I like how you write Sho as a kind of 'betrayer' and rebel. he tried to betray everyone's expectations by doing the unexpected things AND I like Nino's comment about it “You have an awfully weird way to motivate yourself.”
Their first banter during the first meeting is tense and I like that! Nino snapped well at Sho eventhough he’s scared xD. Though, I don’t understand the reason why Sho brought up his ‘minions’ into the library and purposely made a fuss. It’s not like Sho knew Nino him before right?
By the way, idk but I laughed when you mentioned Sho’s delinquent friends as ‘minion’ xD so Sho is the leader of the delinquent guys? I wonder how Sho could immediately let go off them to study hard. I mean, in the common gangster, leader or ‘Aniki’ is the most respected person and they are the core of the gang. Wouldn’t his minions cry over him if Sho suddenly went missing and back to be a good student again? XDDD
The way Sho ‘disturbed’ Nino is good lmao he didn’t take any violence way to ‘knock’ Nino. Instead, he mentally disturbed Nino and it was hit on the nail xD <3 he know how to handle Nino well lmao <3
I’m quite satisfied with the conversations Sho and Nino had! It was full of ‘traps’ but fluffy and heart-throbbing at the same time. <3
I like the relationship between Nino and Aiba!! <3 I like them being BFF. Nino be like very pouty or always snap at Aiba for being stupid or noisy, but Aiba keeps stick to Nino because he’s Nino and Aiba understand that <3 I like how Aiba appeared everytime when Nino being confused or being flustered by Sho’s doing like when he found out about the arigatou notes. Aiba says what Nino want to say (but he’s too stubborn to admit it xD).
Oh, I wonder what did Nino write as a comeback when Sho wrote a “I’m really going to get back at you, you dwarf!” note?
My favorite is when Sho saved Nino from falling <3 when he said “You’re welcome,” with that damn smirk eventhough Nino still didn’t say anything yet. I can imagine that, he’s just unbearable xD <3 I like how Nino started to grew his curiousity after the falling accident. And how he reacted shyly at Sho’s flirting attempts xD “I assume that you were able to eat all information from these books?” Sho smirked. “You actually think I’m a genius, huh?” SKADFASKFLHADSFKLHASFK ah this kind of thing <3 <3 <3 The late library ‘date’ is GOOD sjkdflhakfasdkf <3 Sho gradually opened his mind (and heart) to Nino while Nino just can’t help but feeling his crush going bigger and bigger lol! And how Sho slept on Nino’s shoulder eventhough Nino was the one sleepy in the library! Awww I wish Nino didn’t wake Sho up and just bring him to his apartment or vice versa xD xD xD AND HOW SHO CONFESSED, IT WAS SHO-ISH. Full of riddles because Sho knew Nino could solve it. ;) I like it when a couple doesn’t contain ‘dominant’ and ‘dominated’, but rather contain two persons on par as partners. Nino was indeed afraid at Sho at first, but, he didn’t want to lose. I like how Nino tried to put himself on the same line with Sho, and not below him despite their physical differences. And I like how Sho treated Nino, he didn’t look down on Nino at all. I wonder if Sho already fell in love with Nino since he was hit by a book? xD
In the end, I’m glad that Nino did well on his character to snap at Sho, because of his (very rude) wake up call, Sho could changed to be better. I like the ending so much! I like how Nino is the one who started the kiss BUT he’s the one who’s flustered in the end lol it’s just Nino-ish! And that bunch of library-kind of pickup lines!! “You can’t take out this book because today’s the last day. But you can take me out.” LMAO <3 also Sho ‘checking’ Nino ‘out’ got me laugh but at the same time I love it! <3
I think I spoke too much, it’s been a while I read a sakumiya fic and I couldn’t help but being happy! Thank you for making me happy dear anon! <3 I hope to see your other sakumiya works from now on~
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First, I would like to thank you so much for writing such a beautiful story <3 you captured the Blonde!Sho and Librarian!Nino well and I love both of their character! <3
I like how you write Sho as a kind of 'betrayer' and rebel. he tried to betray everyone's expectations by doing the unexpected things AND I like Nino's comment about it “You have an awfully weird way to motivate yourself.”
Their first banter during the first meeting is tense and I like that! Nino snapped well at Sho eventhough he’s scared xD. Though, I don’t understand the reason why Sho brought up his ‘minions’ into the library and purposely made a fuss. It’s not like Sho knew Nino him before right?
By the way, idk but I laughed when you mentioned Sho’s delinquent friends as ‘minion’ xD so Sho is the leader of the delinquent guys? I wonder how Sho could immediately let go off them to study hard. I mean, in the common gangster, leader or ‘Aniki’ is the most respected person and they are the core of the gang. Wouldn’t his minions cry over him if Sho suddenly went missing and back to be a good student again? XDDD
The way Sho ‘disturbed’ Nino is good lmao he didn’t take any violence way to ‘knock’ Nino. Instead, he mentally disturbed Nino and it was hit on the nail xD <3 he know how to handle Nino well lmao <3
I’m quite satisfied with the conversations Sho and Nino had! It was full of ‘traps’ but fluffy and heart-throbbing at the same time. <3
I like the relationship between Nino and Aiba!! <3 I like them being BFF. Nino be like very pouty or always snap at Aiba for being stupid or noisy, but Aiba keeps stick to Nino because he’s Nino and Aiba understand that <3 I like how Aiba appeared everytime when Nino being confused or being flustered by Sho’s doing like when he found out about the arigatou notes. Aiba says what Nino want to say (but he’s too stubborn to admit it xD).
Oh, I wonder what did Nino write as a comeback when Sho wrote a “I’m really going to get back at you, you dwarf!” note?
My favorite is when Sho saved Nino from falling <3 when he said “You’re welcome,” with that damn smirk eventhough Nino still didn’t say anything yet. I can imagine that, he’s just unbearable xD <3
I like how Nino started to grew his curiousity after the falling accident. And how he reacted shyly at Sho’s flirting attempts xD “I assume that you were able to eat all information from these books?” Sho smirked. “You actually think I’m a genius, huh?” SKADFASKFLHADSFKLHASFK ah this kind of thing <3 <3 <3
The late library ‘date’ is GOOD sjkdflhakfasdkf <3 Sho gradually opened his mind (and heart) to Nino while Nino just can’t help but feeling his crush going bigger and bigger lol! And how Sho slept on Nino’s shoulder eventhough Nino was the one sleepy in the library! Awww I wish Nino didn’t wake Sho up and just bring him to his apartment or vice versa xD xD xD
AND HOW SHO CONFESSED, IT WAS SHO-ISH. Full of riddles because Sho knew Nino could solve it. ;) I like it when a couple doesn’t contain ‘dominant’ and ‘dominated’, but rather contain two persons on par as partners. Nino was indeed afraid at Sho at first, but, he didn’t want to lose. I like how Nino tried to put himself on the same line with Sho, and not below him despite their physical differences. And I like how Sho treated Nino, he didn’t look down on Nino at all.
I wonder if Sho already fell in love with Nino since he was hit by a book? xD
In the end, I’m glad that Nino did well on his character to snap at Sho, because of his (very rude) wake up call, Sho could changed to be better. I like the ending so much!
I like how Nino is the one who started the kiss BUT he’s the one who’s flustered in the end lol it’s just Nino-ish!
And that bunch of library-kind of pickup lines!! “You can’t take out this book because today’s the last day. But you can take me out.” LMAO <3 also Sho ‘checking’ Nino ‘out’ got me laugh but at the same time I love it! <3
I think I spoke too much, it’s been a while I read a sakumiya fic and I couldn’t help but being happy! Thank you for making me happy dear anon! <3 I hope to see your other sakumiya works from now on~