I need to read this again and again because I guarantee you I will find hidden gems I didn't pick up on the first go through. There's a lot to take in with this fic with the multiple settings and the slow burn, wooo, but that's why I really loved it. I appreciated that Nino wasn't necessarily looking for love but it just found him through Jun so naturally. They had that perfect combination of sizzling and domestic chemistry through this fic that I think fits them and made me grin ear to ear.
I was so impressed with the way you navigated Nino's hesitance as well. He got a little spooked, communicated that with Jun (and made sure to say it wasn't regret - very important), and I think it was totally fair for Jun to be disappointed at first. But Jun still showed up for him, and was patient, and accidentally got his revenge by being sick and not intentionally giving the cold shoulder LOL
“Haven’t I written enough for you?”
WHAT. SO CUTE. Honestly anon, this is a wonderful wonderful fic.
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I was so impressed with the way you navigated Nino's hesitance as well. He got a little spooked, communicated that with Jun (and made sure to say it wasn't regret - very important), and I think it was totally fair for Jun to be disappointed at first. But Jun still showed up for him, and was patient, and accidentally got his revenge by being sick and not intentionally giving the cold shoulder LOL
“Haven’t I written enough for you?”
WHAT. SO CUTE. Honestly anon, this is a wonderful wonderful fic.